Reading Newspaper
Newspaper is very important to fulfil our dayly activity. In the morning, the family and all people in the world interest in reading the newspaper. There are some kinds of newspaper namely, Kendari Post, Media Indonesia, Kendari Express, etc. in southeast Sulawesi especially Kendari, interesting to read Kendari Post because it have more information than other.
The officer usually read newspaper in their leisure time. They read it to look for some information such as, soccer, business, economic, politic, education. etc. they enjoy it because the newspaper can be entertain them selves in dayly activity and give more actual news.
Feedbacks:
- Org: Topic sentence is ok, but your supporting sentences should be related to it. You should give more explanation why newspaper is important in our daily life.
You should also write about newspapers in general, not about Kendari Pos.
All sentences must be in one paragraph, do not separate some sentences.
- Gram : generally ok. (it have --> it has)
- Some mechanic mistakes : spelling(entertain, dayly), capitalisation after full stop( .they)
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