Friday, January 2, 2009

Feedback on Assignment 1 – Risman’s Group

Reading the Newspaper

Reading the newspaper is my hobbies. I can get many information from it because it is not only provide one information or specific information about something, but also provide many information from all kind of human activity or world activity. I like newspaper because it has so many advantages but, one of its advantages which I like so much is its information.

Feedback:
- Organisation: topic and supporting sentences are ok.
- Gram & Vocab : generally ok.

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