Reading the Newspaper
Reading the newspaper give many advantageous for people. By reading the newspaper, we can get more knowledge and it can add knowledge such as knowing the situation or something happen in our country, and also in newspaper there are many informations about health, education, business, work square, and still many information again we can get by reading it.
Feedbacks:
- Org: the topic sentence is good, but you need to write more supporting sentences. You could break the second sentence into shorter sentences.
- Gram: generally ok.
- Vocab: ok
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