My sister is a nurse from PPNI Poltekes in Kendari. Her name is Linda. She was born in Kendari on October, 22th 1985. She studied in her achievement, she is working in Santana Hospital Kendari. Now she is very hapy an our family is happy too.
Feedbacks:
- Organisation: topic and supporting sentences need more improvement.
- Grammar and vocab: generally ok.
Sentence 4 is unclear (studied in her achievement??)
small misktake in spelling (hapy)
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