The Pizza Restaurant
The pizza restaurant can be our favorite place to spend time. We always hanging out there with our friends, family or relation. There we can do everythings, because so many vehicles that be ordered the restaurant. Such as eating many kinds of pizza, chat with our family, friend, or relation, browsing the internet, reading, etc.
Feedbacks:
- Org: topic sentence is ok, but you need to write more supporting sentence (why it's your favourite place?).
vehicles = kendaraan?
Sentence 3 and 4 should not be separated.
- Gram: generally ok.
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