Feedback on Assignment 1 - Wa Ode Farisaty’s Group

Your assignment:
My Sister

My sister is a nurse in the Abunawas’s hospital. She go to the hospital at 07.00 a.m. o’clock and went home at 08.00 p.m. o’clock. But sometimes she had spend the night in the hospital, maybe because many patients or maybe it’s her schedule. In there, she keeps and take care the patients. Sometimes she feel bored, but she have to do it because that’s is the conquence of her job.

Feedback:
- Organisation: The topic sentence is ok, and so are the supporting sentences.
- Grammar: you need to be consistent in the use of verb in 3rd person (She goes, not she go)
- Vocabs: not bad