Reading The Newspaper
Reading the newspaper is one of the activities that we can do on the break times. We can do it anywhere. By reading the newpaper, we can gert many advantages such us we can get information, knowledge, help our self to know something, etc. Many information which performed at the newspaper like issue today, news, life style, health, education, sport, advertisement, etc. All of that information have benefits for the reader.
Feedbacks:
- Organisation: the topic sentence is ok, but it needs more supporting sentences.
- Grammar: ok.
- Vocab: ok
- Needs to improve the mechanics (spelling)
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