My Sister
My sister is a nurse at Bhayangkara Hospital. She has worked there for five years. Her main job in the hospital are helping doctor to look after the patients and sometimes she joins the doctor team to operate the patient. She spends almost of her time at the hospital and she never feel tired to run this job.
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