Melanie is a smart student
Melanie is a student in general high school. She is the most clever student in her class and she always get a good mark in all of the subjects. She always study everyday and she also joins with private class. She likes read many books about knowledge, so that she has broad knowledge, her parents and teachers are very proud with her successful.
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- Org : You should start with more specific topic sentence.
- Gram: you need to be consistent with the use of verbs for 3rd person singular.
- Vocab: the most clever should be the cleverest; proud with should be proud of)
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