My Sister
My sister is a smart girl. She was born in Bau-Bau, December 1st, 1984. So she is 24 years old. She is a clever student in her university, she graduated her study only 4 years.
She not only smart in academic but also at organization in her university. She never became the leader of PMII. Now, she has been working in her university as a lecturer. But, she still has dream to continue her study in Australia. Although, she is very busy, but she always spare her time to visit her family in Bau-Bau.
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